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1My Website  Empty My Website Thu Sep 26, 2013 10:42 pm

Kačaniklić

Kačaniklić

Hi guys,
As most of you know I've just started a degree in journalism and have started up a blog. I will try and make as much of it as possible to do with sport, but that might not always be possible due to my course restrictions. The address is [You must be registered and logged in to see this link.] and the more traffic I get coming through the better.
The first article is about Luis Suarez and his impact on world football, please if you are going to comment try and be sensible or ill just remove the comments simple.
Thanks guys and hopefully I'll start catching up on all those postponed matches soon Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy 

2My Website  Empty Re: My Website Fri Sep 27, 2013 2:55 am

emile fai


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Kačaniklić wrote:please if you are going to comment try and be sensible
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red it, was alrite

3My Website  Empty Re: My Website Fri Sep 27, 2013 3:30 am

suck a penguin dick

suck a penguin dick

my opinion:
You need to develop your idea even more. From what i read, you only described a few problems he has encountered yet and then you just wrote a couple lines of development. Well this is not enough, you shud be having 2 main ideas and get a conclusion out of it. Furthermore, Your opinion isnt very clear, if you show up wether you like suarez or not, this could be more interesting to read. about the style, looks alright to me but im not english so i cant be sure about it.

just my opinion

4My Website  Empty Re: My Website Fri Sep 27, 2013 3:52 am

Kačaniklić

Kačaniklić

Im trying to be a professional journalist, I'm not allowed to have any sort of strong opinion but thank you for the feedback.

5My Website  Empty Re: My Website Sun Sep 29, 2013 9:11 am

Kačaniklić

Kačaniklić

[You must be registered and logged in to see this link.] Heres my latest article on Martin Jol. Tried to be as unbaised as possible but doubt I've done a great job. Please just click the link, even if you don't read it. The more views, the better Smile

6My Website  Empty Re: My Website Sun Sep 29, 2013 9:21 am

MidgetBoy1996

MidgetBoy1996

You said Bryan Ruiz is a Costa Rican manager?

7My Website  Empty Re: My Website Sun Sep 29, 2013 9:35 am

Kačaniklić

Kačaniklić

ffs im tired i was just writing without thinking thanks for letting me know

8My Website  Empty Re: My Website Sun Sep 29, 2013 7:30 pm

Cockney Shithead

Cockney Shithead

Kačaniklić wrote:Im trying to be a professional journalist, I'm not allowed to have any sort of strong opinion but thank you for the feedback.
Piers Morgan makes a good job out of having an opinion. Smile 
Enjoyed reading your articles though, small grammar point is that it should be 'would have' or 'should have' rather than 'would of'. Otherwise good job.

9My Website  Empty Re: My Website Sun Sep 29, 2013 8:12 pm

Kačaniklić

Kačaniklić

Are you seriously suggesting that being more like Piers Morgan would improve my writing? I do understand your point, an opinion does provoke a reaction but for what I'm doing I need to be impartial. I would love to have an opinion trust me, but I can't really. And thanks for pointing out the error.

10My Website  Empty Re: My Website Sun Sep 29, 2013 9:10 pm

cuc oein


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lol

11My Website  Empty Re: My Website Sun Sep 29, 2013 9:10 pm

emile fai


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Another decent read. I'm all for being subtle but in your introduction I think you probably should have expanded it a little to explain the situation to go with the title a bit more.

12My Website  Empty Re: My Website Wed Oct 02, 2013 9:10 pm

Rénbeaudach


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A decent second article, but I felt a bit more depth could have been offered on Fulham's recent slide, for example the loss of creative attack-minded midfielders such as Gera, Dempsey and Dembélé without adequate replacement (Ruiz doesn't seem to have the vision required to act as a sole playmaker), coupled with the fact that Berbatov's potential needs good service in order to be unleashed and that despite being an extremely technically gifted player isn't one to be able to pull a lower-mid-table side like Fulham up from their bootstraps.

Perhaps offer analysis on how the system should be changed to accommodate the players' shortcomings and strengths, which players should be brought in, and if Jol goes who might be a more obvious fit for Fulham?

13My Website  Empty Re: My Website Wed Oct 02, 2013 9:18 pm

Mr Shithead

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14My Website  Empty Re: My Website Wed Oct 02, 2013 11:53 pm

Kačaniklić

Kačaniklić

Cheers Ren, I would of loved to of included more analysis but there were some time restraints. I've got to stop going out and writing my articles the morning before its due in thumbsup 

15My Website  Empty Re: My Website Thu Oct 03, 2013 2:52 am

Kačaniklić

Kačaniklić

Here's my next post, this time about Romelu Lukaku and how he can't get into the Chelsea team. Not exactly my greatest area of expertise but I'm running out of ideas.
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If you do have any ideas for what I could write about, feel free to leave them here. Non serious suggestions will be deleted and I'll give you a nice little ban to go with it Smile
#abusingmyadminpowers



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16My Website  Empty Re: My Website Thu Oct 03, 2013 2:58 am

Emo Twat

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Not sure if you are aloud to do that or if you like it or not, but you could do top 5 transfers and how they did an impact on the team, like Isco for example, hes been doing great. Or even making previews of Matches that are most interesting. Don't know but dont ban me haha

17My Website  Empty Re: My Website Thu Oct 03, 2013 3:12 am

suck a penguin dick

suck a penguin dick

was good

but can you make your articles more specific, so an experimented football fan could still learn something with your article (here, you could talk about his crazy stats at the age of 18 in the Belgium Pro League and how Chelsea managed to get him instead of other big European teams).

18My Website  Empty Re: My Website Thu Oct 03, 2013 3:31 am

Kačaniklić

Kačaniklić

Cheers JeJe you're right I could do something like that (and I think you mean experienced, not experimental Wink ) and ye Apple that's a good enough idea not to warrant a ban but I might leave that for a month or so at least so that signings can have a bigger impact at their clubs.

19My Website  Empty Re: My Website Thu Oct 03, 2013 3:39 am

cuc oein


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not banned Smile

20My Website  Empty Re: My Website Thu Oct 03, 2013 5:21 am

emile fai


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Lack of a conclusion on the latest one imo, kinda ended abruptly lel.

21My Website  Empty Re: My Website Thu Oct 03, 2013 7:42 am

Mr Shithead

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Still better than Dev's YouTube videos though #pray4dev

22My Website  Empty Re: My Website Thu Oct 03, 2013 8:10 am

Rénbeaudach


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A few ideas:

-Comparisons between Riquelme, Pirlo and the old breed of playmakers and more modern creative midfielders such as Modric and Özil, how the game has changed.

-Why some managers find it easy to succeed in lower divisions (i.e. Neil Warnock and Ian Holloway in the Championship, Simon Grayson in League 1), yet often suffer a dramatic change in fortunes when they earn promotion.

-Why Clint Dempsey would have been worth €100m if he were 22 last summer. (lol)

-Lichsteiner, Wigan Athletic under Martínez and the rise of the 3-5-2 formation

23My Website  Empty Re: My Website Thu Oct 03, 2013 6:23 pm

cuc oein


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Jai wrote:not banned Smile
ye boi

24My Website  Empty Re: My Website Thu Oct 03, 2013 6:56 pm

Kačaniklić

Kačaniklić

Jai wrote:not banned Smile
not yet Smile

25My Website  Empty Re: My Website Fri Oct 04, 2013 2:38 am

cuc oein


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Kačaniklić wrote:
Jai wrote:not banned Smile
not yet Smile
very true

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